tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post6947446523313921795..comments2013-06-14T10:07:48.565-04:00Comments on Frum Factory: Surfing LoveProducthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15903085114768392434noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-26705036309192321802009-11-10T07:12:22.222-05:002009-11-10T07:12:22.222-05:00brilliant!!!!!!brilliant!!!!!!Lars Shalomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00889280301374934767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-40998064391961794622009-05-17T13:56:00.000-04:002009-05-17T13:56:00.000-04:00this is yours?this is yours?larshttp://dadoichzlig.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-21131689654540781032009-03-12T12:12:00.000-04:002009-03-12T12:12:00.000-04:00Thank you, Eitz. I make an effort to improve.Thank you, Eitz. I make an effort to improve.Producthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15903085114768392434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-4682593248147049442009-03-12T01:00:00.000-04:002009-03-12T01:00:00.000-04:00Amazing!I really liked how the second and third pa...Amazing!<BR/><BR/>I really liked how the second and third paragraph have their respective last two lines shorter than their first two, it promotes pause and contemplation in the reader.<BR/><BR/>I think this is your best poem so far.Samuel Katzhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09944061608450443441noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-12818135089532292832009-03-06T09:44:00.000-05:002009-03-06T09:44:00.000-05:00Convergence of the Twain (Thomas Hardy)IIn a solit...Convergence of the Twain (Thomas Hardy)<BR/>I<BR/>In a solitude of the sea<BR/>Deep from human vanity,<BR/>And the Pride of Life that planned her, stilly couches she.<BR/><BR/>II<BR/>Steel chambers, late the pyres<BR/>Of her salamandrine fires,<BR/>Cold currents thrid, and turn to rhythmic tidal lyres.<BR/><BR/>III<BR/>Over the mirrors meant<BR/>To glass the opulent<BR/>The sea-worm Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1800121991461099731.post-60528557081878059282009-03-06T09:07:00.000-05:002009-03-06T09:07:00.000-05:00Like ripples in the river the steamer has parted,T...Like ripples in the river the steamer has parted,<BR/>They exist eternally, but the steamer got them started.<BR/><BR/>Those who see them may one day say, <BR/>it is the grace of the steamer, which has a part to play. Every Day.Penhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17895596986880085446noreply@blogger.com